Bài viết mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 – Line Graph (Biểu đồ đường) và Bar chart (Biểu đồ cột)

Bài viết 1:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The line graph compares the number of cars stolen for every 1000 vehicles in four countries from 1990 to 1999. Overall, it can be seen that car thefts were far higher in Great Britain than in the other three counties throughout the whole time frame.

To begin, car thefts in Sweden, France and Canada followed a fairly similar pattern over the first five years, all remaining at between 5 and 10 per thousand. The general trend though for France and Canada was a decline in the number of vehicles stolen over the period, with both at around 6 in 1999. In contrast, Sweden experienced an upward trend, starting the period at approximately 8, and finishing at just under 15.

Interestingly, car thefts in Great Britain started at 18 per thousand, which far exceeded that of the other countries. It then fluctuated over the next nine years, reaching a peak of 20 thefts per 1000 in 1996, and ending the period slightly lower than where it began, at approximately 17 per thousand.

 

(174 words)

 

Band 8

 

Nhận xét:

– Phần Tóm tắt viết tốt

– Bố cục bài viết tốt, nêu đủ các xu hướng thay đổi chính

– Phần Thân bài nhóm thông tin tốt khi chia Sweden, France và Canada vào 1 nhóm và Great Britain vào đoạn còn lại 

– Vốn từ vựng tốt, ngữ pháp sử dụng đúng, không sai

 

Bài viết 2:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows US consumers’ average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

 

The line graph compares average yearly spending by Americans on mobile and landline phone services from 2001 to 2010.

It is clear that spending on landline phones fell steadily over the 10-year period, while mobile phone expenditure rose quickly. The year 2006 marks the point at which expenditure on mobile services overtook that for residential phone services.

In 2001, US consumers spent an average of nearly $700 on residential phone services, compared to only around $200 on cell phone services. Over the following five years, average yearly spending on landlines dropped by nearly $200. By contrast, expenditure on mobiles rose by approximately $300.

In the year 2006, the average American paid out the same amount of money on both types of phone service, spending just over $500 on each. By 2010, expenditure on mobile phones had reached around $750, while the figure for spending on residential services had fallen to just over half this amount.

 

(162 words, band 9)

 

Bài viết 3:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

 

Hoàn thành bài viết sau với các từ dưới đây:

periodic      period        temporarily         remained         and          steady          steadily           by           from              trend

 

The graph shows changes in the price of fresh fruits and vegetables, sugar and sweets, and carbonated drinks over a thirty-year _____ (1) in the US between 1979 _____ (2) 2009. The graph also shows the general _____ (3) in the consumer price index during this time.

While the consumer price index showed a slow and _____ (4) increase from 1979 to 2009, the same cannot be said for the price of carbonated, or soft drinks. After rising briefly between 1979 and 1981, they _____ (5) fairly constant until 1999, when the price did begin to increase slowly.

In contrast, there was a marked difference in the price of fresh fruits and vegetables, which, despite _____ (6) fluctuations, rose _____ (7) throughout this period. In fact, fresh food prices only levelled out _____ (8) between 1990 and 1992 and again _____ (9) 2000 to 2001. However, _____ (10) 2008 the price had increased by more than 300%.

 

Đáp án:

1. period

2. and

3. trend

4. steady

5. remained

6. periodic

7. steadily

8. temporarily

9. from

10. by

 

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Bài viết 1:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

 

 

The bar chart shows the number of British people who emigrated to five destinations over the period 2004 to 2007. It is evident from the chart that throughout the period, the most popular place to move to was Australia.

Emigration to Australia stood at just over 40,000 people in 2004, which was approximately 6,000 higher than for Spain, and twice as high as the other three countries. Apart from a jump to around 52,000 in 2006, it remained around this level throughout the period.

The next most popular country for Britons to move to was Spain, though its popularity declined over the time frame to finish at below 30,000 in 2007. Despite this, the figure was still higher than for the remaining three countries. Approximately 20,000 people emigrated to New Zealand each year, while the USA fluctuated between 20-25,000 people over the period.

Although the number of visitors to France spiked to nearly 35,000 in 2005, it was the country that was the least popular to emigrate to at the end of the period, at just under 20,000 people.

 

(179 words)

 

Band 8

 

Nhận xét: 

– Câu giới thiệu và tóm tắt viết tốt.

– Bố cục phần thân bài tốt. Miêu tả số liệu cao nổi bật tại Australia trước, sau đó đến các nước khác có số liệu thấp hơn. Đặc biệt là nước Pháp được viết cuối cùng để cho thấy sự tăng đột biến chỉ trong năm 2005.

– Bài viết tổng quan có đề cập đến xu hướng thay đổi, có sự so sánh

– Vốn từ vựng tốt và có sử dụng nhiều cấu trúc ngữ pháp khác nhau.

 

Bài viết 2:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

 

Hoàn thành bài viết sau:

The charts give information about the genres of TV programmes that Australian men and women and different age groups watch. It is clear from the charts that women tend to watch _____ (1) television than man overall, although they watch slightly _____ (2) game shows. The people who watch the _____ (3) television are in the 45+ age group.

Nearly 70% of women watch reality shows, which is almost _____ (4) as many as the percentage of men who choose this genre of programme. Nevertheless, most age groups watch _____ (5) reality shows than game shows revealing that game shows are generally _____ (6) popular than reality shows.

The percentage of people watching reality shows increases steadily from ages 16 to 45 with the _____ (7) percentage of viewers, at just over 50% of the age group 16-24 and the _____ (8) percentage, at 68% of the over-45s.

However, the pattern is different for game shows. The number of programmes watched by 25- to 44-year-olds is _____ (9) lower than the number watched by 16- to 24-year-olds and those over 45. Just over 50% of 16- to 24-year-olds watch game shows, but this share is not _____ (10) high as the share of people aged 45 and over watching game shows, at nearly 70%. Only 41% of 35- to 44-year-olds watch game shows, and the share of 24- to 34-year-olds is _____ (11) lower at 38%.

 

Đáp án:

1. more

2. fewer

3. most

4. twice

5. more

6. less

7. lowest / smallest

8. highest / biggest / largest / greatest

9. significantly / considerably 

10. as

11. slightly / even

 

Bài viết 3:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Hoàn thành bài viết với các từ dưới đây:

by contrast      indicates         lowest           compares           overall            whereas           except           higher         highest         however             largest           among

 

The bar chart _____ (1) how consumers in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan allocated different shares of total spending to categories such as food, housing, and transportation in 2009.

We can see that the United States had the _____ (2) housing expenditure share, 26% of total expenditures in 2009. The United Kingdom and Japan followed, with 24% and 22%, respectively. Canada had the _____ (3) housing share at 21%. Housing was the _____ (4) expenditure component in all countries _____ (5) Japan.

_____ (6), Canada had the largest transportation share of all four countries at 20%. The United States and the United Kingdom had the next-highest transportation shares, 17% and 15%, respectively. Japan had the lowest, at 10%.

_____ (7), in Japan, consumers spent 23% of their total expenditures on food in 2009. The United Kingdom had the second-highest share at 20%. Canada, with 15%, and the United States, with 14% had the lowest food expenditure shares among the countries studied.

_____ (8), the data _____ (9) that housing and health care shares of total expenditures were _____ (10) in the United States than in Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in 2009, _____ (11) Americans had the lowest clothing share. Canada had the highest clothing and transportation shares, and Japan had the highest food share, _____ (12) the countries compared.

 

(214 words)

 

Đáp án:

1. compares

2. highest

3. lowest

4. largest

5. except

6. By contrast

7. However

8. Overall

9. indicates

10. higher

11. whereas

12. among